If this is your first game here are some tips you might find useful
Please explain whats your game about (Pitch)
Add images at least that show the gameplay, why? people hardly will download something they dont know.
About the game:
It really surprise me the game! you can take any screenshot and it will be 100 times better than the actual image
At least you know is a "3D shooter game" with cel shading style.
Good stuff I found
Game speed is great
Reload animation and look is great
Particles are great
Aiming is great
Things to improve
to be the first level dont make it too imposible, Damage of enemies is too heavy and get killed super fast i tried moving on the same side and they autoaim me, I had to do "Left, Right, Left, Right in order to avoid.
Reduce the speed of bullets of enemies at least 30% less
Why reducing my HP when I just land on the level?, is unfair and that will make player get angry at the game .
Make the player reload with "R" is the most common FPS stuff to do.
There are some colliders in the stairs part that are annoying
I think Killing all is quite tired, you should put and ending flag as a goal, that will be more satisfying for the players.There is a long way on the indie journey :) I hope you keep doing what you love.
