Binged it and there is a lot of potential. Here are my fresh thoughts:
Firstly, the character designs fit their characterization. The portrayal of Micah's anxiety is accurate and well done (also terribly relatable). The writing is mostly well written (I just had a few nitpicks with the writing style at some points but it is such a subjective thing I will not specify it). The characters have chemistry, and the banter is fun to read. The demo ran smoothly, I did not have trouble with the performance of the game or the pacing. Yoh's scene I like a lot because he feels very dynamic. I like the artstyle and lineart. The background music was not too quiet or too loud. I like the choice and volume for it.
Secondly, there was a typo in Avery's dialogue at one point. (When he asked Micah if he would want to be around a self deprecating person, I think). Watch out for those, developer. I have mixed feelings about the backgrounds. The texture looks nice and fitting with the main art but other times the contrast in styles is a little jarring. Not that distracting - but if you pay attention it is quite noticeable. More expressions on the characters would be lovely. For example, when Micah expressed his anger I truly would have felt it if his expression matched his words in the writing. /(unless I missed it? bc there are such changes in the cast's expressions shown in other moments)/ And just a couple more illustrations/details here and there would enrich the experience. For example, when the narration focuses on hands, show a drawing of their hands. I would've liked to see Avery smoking the cigarette so often brought up or at least see smoke around him (or a quick image of him with the cig when we meet him then simply change to his normal model).
Thirdly, I think some sound effects placed in the right places or in instances where sounds are significant or focused on by the narration would be great. Of course, these are extra suggestions. Only do them if manageable. The most important thing is that the game has no bugs or problems.
Overall, I enjoyed playing. And the character arc and lesson that can be done with Micah is great and it would have been very useful to 8th grade me. Will rate and review the full game. Patiently waiting.
Lastly-
Props, Noodlings!