So I did. Considering I posted that 2/'3rds of a year ago I'm not bothered by not remembering it. It's still terrible writing objectively.
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Is there a way to just ditch the Academy section? Because it is fucking painful. I love the characters and the story but I hate everything to do with the Academy. It is insanely poorly written compared to everything else. 20 year olds don't have bullies at school. This seems like a storyline written for a 16 year old. No 20 year old is going to the bathroom because of something JIm said. No one. It's absurd.
In a game with fairies and sex magic the Academy is the least believable part of it. It makes no sense what so every. It doesn't fit. It doesn't accomplish anything except for making me use the Skip button. I have been to academies. This place is madness. Qanon ravings make more sense than the Academy does. They give you one class, no supplies or supply lists, and expect you to graduate with some degree that you didn't choose in a year? Hogwarts makes more sense as a school than this.
The difference in writing between the rest of this game and everything to do with the Academy is absolutely baffling. Did someone else write that section? Did you write this section in a peyote filled trance? Did an AI write it?
This is out of genuine frustration because I love the rest of the game and the characters. So this part just blindsided me with weird railroaded decisions and just nonsensical structure and characters.
I'm glad you liked what you saw! I am pretty happy with how this project has developed so far and I have a lot of ideas for how I am going to build upon this. Many of which are listed under the game description. But if you have any questions or feedback I pretty much live online... so feel free to contact me.