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Runey, great game. Always excited to see a new update.

I don't have to be a professor (or re born professor, whatever that means) to express my view on the content. What I should and should do is not up to you. I stick by what I said.

Sorry dude but you just blew it. Your game had potential, if you could only polish your animation skills. Great model work, story with a great sexual tension but lacking that animation polish. I'd happily pay for the final version but for a work in progress like this where the developer is still learning the tools, I think not.

Maybe I'm a snowflake or maybe all you fangirls who get your knickers in a twist because one person don't agree with you about this game are the real snowflakes. Plot twist, dun-dun-duuun

Fair comment. My review could be more extensive and to that end I've expanded it to include what is ok about the game.

To be honest it is the lack of exactly those things that I like about the game. It's what makes it different from pretty much all other renpy style games. I'm really impressed that the developer has taken a gameplay approach rather than a picturebook approach. It's what makes this game pretty much unique in the genre.

Nice approach to a renpy game. It has actual gameplay elements. I'd even enjoy this game without the sex stuff. It almost seems superfluous in this game although, that said, those are some great animations. Some of the best I have seen in this type of game and by that I mean better than some "pro" games I've played. Very nice work.

Would be a great help if you could share a hint where you found it :)

I didn't lecture about the scene. How about you read that again, unless all the blood went to your little head and you can't concentrate enough to read two sentences

It may surprise you but some of us care about the story element too. You might settle for fast forwarding between sex scenes while all your blood goes to the little head but you don't represent everyone. And yeah, God forbid someone should provide some critique, right? Let's pretend it's all hunky dory and hope nothing ever improves. Let's just strive for mediocre eh?

Puerile, sorry. Really hard to get past some of the dialogue especially the pseudo-medical nonsense. Maybe research your subject a little if you're going to write a story. Yeah, I can see you put a fair bit of work into graphics and animations. Not too shabby. The game elements are ok though some seem to be more of a time-sink than have any practical use once max score has been reached (school). 
For the story, maybe get a co-writer with some writing experience to help out. There are things that will stand out as both racist and homophobic in a very immature way. I note that my comment is not well received but I'm not here to blow smoke up anyone's ass. I'll say it as I see it and when something needs improvement I'd rather see it improved than ignored.

I was going to ask if you want some help with the translation of the game because sometimes it's cringeworthy but first, mybe sort out your stereotyping a bit. There are two criminals in the game and, of course, they are the only two black characters, wtf is that about dude? If you want to be taken seriously as a game creator you need to get your head out of your ass and get with what's considered appropriate in the 21st century. 

When the heck did rape become politics? I think you need to sit down and reevaluate your life buddy.

How do you check your grades? There's a girl, Nikki, in the school yard I can talk to and who asks if I want to check my grades but I don't get an option to do so. It just says "No. I'm just passing by..."
Currently the only way I can check it is by looking in the savefile.

Cool. I'l buy the game at the end of May then I guess xD

If you set it to skip unseen text it's quicker to get through the rerun xD

Is there a way to change the relationship titles? This "landlady" and "half roommate" is really getting on my nerves. How about stepmother and stepsister instead. It gives a mor natural flow to the dialog (and it's still not incest). Make the term a variable that players can set themselves just like you set your character's name. For example, when the player is first introduced to Sandra they are prompted "Sandra is your:" and you enter relationship term.

You parted with money for a game that is "in development" but has not had any update for many month and the last note from the dev almost 200 days ago. Updates? You get em if you're lucky and the dev gets back to making anything of the game.

On PC I just copied the updated files over the old files. That leaves the saved files in the right place.