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coz thats the exact theme of the game. its supposed to be something simple and peaceful. if you’re looking for some kind of jaw dropping, flaming hoop jumping or like totally shameless story, this is not the one you’re looking for. And I don’t think leaving “Nuh uh, don’t like” would be a good idea. its like someone waking in your face and looking at it and then say “Nuh uh, ugly.”

No one’s stopping you from leaving negative comments but you atleast need to justify or express why.

Just criticism is not healthy, try to make it constructive atleast.

Since itch does not have a way to view public reviews, I’ll post it here:

First a confession: I ignored this VN back then because I wasn’t interested in deer furs but eventually, I decided I should play it for the sake of the story.

Now on to the main review.

Dawn Chorus.

A very sensual VN written with great care and mindfulness. It felt like a breath of fresh air from the usual furry VN I played before that focuses more on hot characters you’ll drool over or a roller coaster ride of suspense and thrill. No. For me, it was all about feelings and connecting with people.

The VN itself despite giving you an option to choose a route (in a subtle manner) still allows you to bond with other characters in an intimate way. No event is not without a purpose nor felt like a filler. You can say it’s like a getaway, a therapy, a peaceful perfect world you can dive into and live in without the harshness of the outside world where you can float and relax.

Looking into technical writing, I felt that it wasn’t forced, it wasn’t too expressive, nor too strong. Simple words masterfully selected and manipulated to ensure the lightheartedness of each dialogues but still retains the deep feelings and emotions that one can understand without having to think.

I’d honestly recommend this to anyone who wants a wonderful vacation in a peaceful snowy covered lodge with wonderful people and a hearty meal for the soul.

• A 10/10 from a very picky VN player

thank you for the hard work!

Definitely a breath of fresh air. Good writing too. I hope you guys can keep the momentum coz this one is filled with crazy possibilities with people no longer bound by old laws and the world itself changed. Looking forward to more.

So far I’m liking the narrative and how simple things are. There are quite some peaks and good mellows in the story which is just the right mix. But there is something that bothers me sometimes and that is the grammar. there are a few that might be simplified for non-native English speakers or can be reconstructed sentences to make it easier to comprehend for the readers. But all in all, its still good. Just a bit of tweaks that’s all. Tho I might have an idea why it might’ve been like this and that is because of localization. Some languages have shorter characters used to express sentences while others are longer which in turn might be pretty difficult to maintain. Keep up the good work!

I can feel the holiday spirit from the opening xD

that would be too convenient honestly, with what was described of how Cyrus looks like and how the different the world setting is, I'm starting to doubt that his memories are even real.

+1 for the funny opening statement 🤣🤣🤣🤣

I am truly compelled to rate this game but I am holding back as much as I can until the game peaks and choices are unveiled.

At first I was very skeptical about this. With the kind of bland-ish opening, I was weighing if I should close the game and pick a different one. but the transition from a mysterious to normal, to mysterious scenario again got my attention.

I pushed through and next thing I know there are progressive character exchange, slow build up of personality, past and history, and level of mutual understanding combined with a massive amount of doubt, possibilities, circumstances, and action-reaction through their journey; and with that, the opening felt like a calm before the storm.

A storm so massive; beautiful and destructive you'll be swept away and leave you begging for the more. More interaction, more events, more about the world, the past, the present and future that awaits them.

This VN has left me raging on my keyboard and filling my head with so much theories and assumption and I'm just an emotional turmoil right now from the amalgamation of everything I've read and felt to the point I could almost feel myself standing there just listening to how animated these two characters converse and go about their ways.

Now I'm pretty sure this is sounding like a Comment on Rating but its not. Not yet, you guys already got my full undivided attention and my heart soars from the story telling, the art and the music. I truly wish for the success of this VN and for everyone else working in this project.

I'm not gonna say "keep doing a great job" but rather "Keep doing what you guys are doing" because you guys are rocking this already.

Man that was kind of a refreshing ride. It wasn't too lax or loose, it wasn't too hot or tense, it just felt quite natural until the deciding phase of which to pick. I'll be holding back on my rating and comments for now until it gets a bit further but I can see its gonna be as what it is being portrayed "A nice relaxing vacation and catching up to old feelings and blooming new ones between friends. "

right now, no way of getting it other than bull tribe.