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I must say that this is one of the most innovative vn I have seen, the theme feels very refreshing to look at, a science fiction story from which things have stopped having meaning, I have the feeling that very few histories take that of immorality as something bad, you can feel the loneliness in every damn text, something that I love a lot, also that (for now) the few moments of terror are very good, the erratic lines in the silhouettes give a very good feeling of chaos and danger , the characters feel very alive as they are not in the typical pose of looking straight ahead, the scenery despite being obscure they  have very good colors and the music is simply perfect for this setting, the story also stands out very well on its own, to Being only the prologue leaves a lot of intrigues, which I hope we'll see what is about, I loved this VN, I hope we'll see more soon :3

I just started and I ran into a very strange... error, because it only happens with the background and it takes me out of the immersion :,3, any ideas on how fix it?

La verdad mi experiencia con la VN podría ser resumida en esta imagen  

(Quien entendió, entendió xd)

But know talking more in deep, i think this one is really a good one, the history is intriguing to the point were you question everything and everyone, which is why it pick my interest, the thing of how each person make their theories of what or who bring them here, also as how we are doing it (atleast for now)

the style is also a very good point, the style is so full of life and unique, and the little animation it have when it change of sprite is very cool, it give a very good effect, the background also is good, i mean sometimes is simple but it do is job of telling were are we, but can go very far when is needed, which i really love it

about the music i say is god, it do the perfect job to give the feel that need to the scene, i more specifically talk about the one in the hallway in that kind of anphitheater, it really put me a little scare (more because the mc custion if 933 even exist...) but some that bothers me a bit is the sound when the character talk, i mean is very good to know how is the voice of a character, but sometimes i think it sound very loud, so maybe turn it down a bit?, or make a option for it (but maybe that already exist and i'm making a foul of myself...)

so in summary, i like the idea this VN is taking, it so full of possibilities that just make me want to know more, but we will have to wait for that, which i be looking for with a lot of enthusiasm

(también algo que quería resaltar, es que esto fuera hecho por un grupo latino, mas específicamente tres personas, es simplemente sorpréndete y me alegra ver eso, desde Colombia les digo, excelente trabajo :3)

I really must say that this visual novel is one of the most interesting I've read in a while, the plot sounds very mysterious with a protagonist who due to certain magical events is now a lion, which I think is great since it's not something that I have seen before, also the scenarios are impressive, I am surprised to see so many illustrated scenarios, and the characters are very good, the fact that they play with perspective and even have animations, simply beautiful, I hope to be able to read more of this interesting story soon ( although I also have to say it, agnarr is thick af ... and i reaaaaally like that >:3)

in the beginning you have to go left and then keep going(is not complicated you only have to choose that and you will be in the route)

the wolf has come back!, but what cost?, literally i feel with the cliffhanger of this update, i can't wait for the next one!

yeah i though the same, although what I do not feel at all explains why the protagonist is traumatized, I know that it would have to do with his past life but there is something here that does not fit, maybe it has to do with the ability to understand wolves and the others?

yeah i know, but still she is funny and cute, it really take off guard with that i almost forgot xd

she is literally the only elder that is not a bitch, also is super funny when she say something out of blue that don't have sense, for my is my favority :3 ( with vulgor and vithyr)

I think I agree with everyone when I say that this update can only be defined in one way ... "you are as beautiful as the day I lost you"... xd, it felt fantastic to have jayce and his misadventures returned, I laughed too much with the expansion of the history of maccon, although now I have the doubt if at some point something bad will happen to go along with david, also that I wonder how long it will take for the next update, I hope it will be soon, also referring to the theory conspiracy ... I laughed too much with it xD

i don't know, maybe in the shock of moment he think that jayce has a heart atack and try to revive him pressing in her bare chest? (it was so hilarius that i really don't see much a explanation here xd)

I really love the new sprites of the characters, rask is my favorite, it looks very cute, also that for a moment I thought you had removed the animation of the blinking, but it is more like that sometimes it does not appear (for example at the beginning of the Tom's route none of the brothers blinks), but regarding Tom's story in this update, I love to see little by little memories of how Tom and Jayce were in the past, besides that what he fainted about was very funny, Can't wait to see how it goes on, splendid job

well with the context of the history is something like that, because he has strips even knowing that he's a feline, also that explain about his hair is not dyed

perfect!!, thanks, now I can see what's new about "husband" tom >:3

Has someone been able to download 14.1 ?, every time I try to download it, I download 14.0 instead

yeah, poor guy, but anyway that help a lot because i don't know if something happen for push him

(spoiler warning) (jun's route)

I have really been wondering about whatever I have been doing Jun's route well, since according to me I understand throughout the route you have several opportunities to ask him about his secret, which I think is not necessary to press him regarding that (also added to the fact to save him from being run over) ... but if someone confirms it, I will be calmer

i really hope the same, what shoichi did in the jun's route left me very shocked (even make me feel very disappointed, hate him a little but he has his reasons... also i really feel bad for jun in that part )

I also forgot to say that in the part of the memory where jayce meets tom for the first time there is an bug ... or so I think, since the image of jayce is not seen as a child ... it will be a mistake or is it to keep it as a secret?

I have to say that I liked this update a lot, it is not one of the best but it is decent, my favorite part was where rask praises jayce's stripes, also that even though the day felt like a copy and paste of john's he knew how to mark his Originality, although I must say that now there is more mystery in Tom's name, since here it says that his surname is nully, but on his route, in the memory of Jayce he makes a mistake and says sarabi, but then he corrects himself by saying nully. .. this now left me very intrigued (also the fact that now for some reason he likes rask ... even though he probably just respects him ... also another thing I have to say is that the end of rask leaves me intrigued, already that having two uncles is very mysterious and living in the middle of a forest is very suspicious ... at least for me) *insert sound of making crazy theories*

take all the time you need, patience is a virtue to have something of quality :3

every 25th of the month...also if the creator don't have any problem xd (but it say it though :v)

I was playing maccon's route again and I found that there is a small error, the scene where David appears still happens on this route knowing that you already sat with him and saw them (so it should not happen ... although it is also curious that It only happens in the pc version ... I'm also sorry that it's a photo, I don't know how to take a screen or to the pc without the game becoming invisible :V)

It is really worth the wait, I loved the update, I really think that John is very funny, also the thing of train seemed very cute, although I have to say that the sprits from the front look a bit strange but it really was a good addition, also that I like that that things from other routes are applied is very good, but I really loved that that John did in the end I really liked it and I think he made it one of my favorite routes (because it is the funniest xd ... although I still have doubts about his parents :v)

Okay, okay, if it is to have more quality it will be worth waiting more (although I'm still curious about what the update will be>: 3)

I have a really big question, since the art is so beautiful and the updates are very punctual, I wonder if the art is made by you or someone else?

I have to say it ... I REALLY IMPRESSED THIS UPDATE !!! :O , I mean that maccon is no longer a student, it is a great change because I think it will give more flexibility to his own route, but I think I will miss him :,( , but something that I loved was the brother of Maccon, David seems very tender, it's like a little creature that acts as bad but I can't seem to harm a fly (despite the fact that he stole jayce's wallet :v), my favorite part was when john started chasing david while tom and maccon was chatting, that really made me laugh (also that what maccon says about tom's last name makes me think that  is true that he is not john's biological brother), for me this update left me eager to see the second day of maccon,I'm curious to see what happens ......

pt: it really doesn't matter so much I have to wait, your work is of such quality that it's worth >:v

in theory, yes, since according to the author the update that is coming is his, because he is rewriting all the routes (also the very nice one, I don't think he will delete it :3)

the Updates are every 25th of the month. 

in the next update (so you won't have to wait that long :3)

pt: if you don't know every update go out every 25th of the month. 

unfortunately the route is blocked because the creator recreates all of them, but don't worry it will come out in the next update

soooo...is it important to the story and was it done on purpose or was it really a mistake and are you glad that the fans post it?

(*visible confusion here*)

the other routes that exist are rask,tom, john's and soon maccon's and it depends on what you do at the beginning, to do john's you simply have to agree to change your seat when he asks you and for tom's you have to refuse it, and for rask's it is go left when you get to campus and then come back (however this could change a bit when the maccon route appears)

these is something I found replaying the rask route and it has me very confused, in the last update, in the memory that jayce has about how he met tom, he tells him that his full name is tom sarabi, but when john is introduced to rask on his own and rask's route, he says that his full name is john nully and as far as i understand jhon and tom are brothers ... shouldn't they have the same last name?, is it a mistake that the creator inadvertently made or is it something important and really john and tom are brothers but not related by blood? (also if I'm wrong correct me)

OOOOH MYY GOOOOOOOOOOOD!!!!!!,  the Little Jayce and Tom are so cute, I really loved that part of the update, also the protagonist's birthday theme put me on the verge of tears, and I really like the new sound effects and the character spirts, I would say that justifies that it is not the whole day ... but what leaves me more doubts is how the updates continue, the following will be the new route of maccon? and will they follow that order until it reach john's route? It is a complete mystery, but it really makes me look forward to the following, splendid work continues like this: 3

if you mean the john brother, yes :v 

i think he means what coming in the next update and for answer the question No one knows yet (i wish the next was the maccon route :V)

I really loved the new rask route, the old one was fine but this one is much better, I say it more than anything because of the "grays", and I have to admit that I laughed a lot with the scene where Jayce launches rask on the curb, the case of just imagining it was very funny xD, but I wonder what will come in the next update, the "new route" of tom or maccom ?, on day two of rask or perhaps the option where "You can save rask from the evil hands of john>: 3 "(in any case it is very good and also that I cannot believe that it was so punctual it was not even noon and the updates were already available)

other things I would like to know where I can read the dev log (to find out what's new in the different routes)

a ok, i was asking because i think you only were translated everything for google translate xd sorry, but i wan a ask something too, why in the version 9.0 only you can make the jhon route? (because you only can go to the right so you can't meet rask or maccon so...that is a programming error o you disabled for a  change later?, i don't now very much of program but a little thing  know, my english is not very good sorry xd, and too for the many questiongs :v)