Currently stuck on the cave maze part of the game. The rocks just keep saying 'it'll open a little later' and I can't find the trigger to open them. Slut statue at 0/3, and I looked all over the area I can access and found zero of the items.
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Really good game. I appreciate how the game is essentially split up into mundane straightforward investigation, or obviously perverted shenanigans, and still remains internally coherent. Kind of a pity that it seems this wasn't in line with my fetishes, but I still think this is a good, quality product.
I liked the writing overall. It was good how you largely explain the world through inference or events, like the spawn point thing. There's a good explanation for Bludge to be worried, for how spawn points work, and for why Bludge can't rescue Astra immediately.
While the game definitely runs on horny logic, I still like how there's a sensible reason for the demon setting things up the way he did. Does enough to kick-start the entire process, then doesn't waste further direct time with it. It feels sensible within the logic of the world, which I really appreciate in writing.
Overall, I think you have the core of something pretty good here, and I definitely would like more if you'd like to move forward with it.
Edit: I'm not entirely sure RPGMaker is the right tool for this though, especially if you're having a lot of trouble wrestling with it. So far at least, the RPGMaker format doesn't seem to be contributing much to the overall experience.
The writing and art for this is really good. I like the little subtext where Fabius likes Aelius, but has obviously never said as much. So he acts like a dick when he finds out Aelius is leaving. Then OOPS, Aelius can't leave. So Fabius keeps deliberately grabbing him as his opponent every day.
With that bit, I like the little feeling you sometimes get in real life. Where it's obvious there's a crush incident going on, but the subject is oblivious. Aelius doesn't come off as particularly dense either, since he's super distracted with his situation and Fabius had obviously not made moves as bold as this beforehand.
So yeah, nice job with the writing there.