i love this so, so much. your writing is incredible and i crave more of it
though i wish kit could give aubrey a tiny little smooch 😔
i love this so, so much! this genre of horror is exactly my cup of tea (and the possibility to add a bit of romance to an otherwise chilling adventure is a delightful bonus)
i like your implementation of the journal, very creative! is it an image or text on a background? 🤔
also, encountered a bug: i went to the pub as my second choice (first being the church) and overheard the information, as opposed to talking to someone there, but the journal entry is about an informant and the conversation next day also alludes to me having met someone
i adore your writing with all my heart, this is a very intriguing demo 💜
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one thing i felt was missing was to call out MC's father for being a hypocrite; he's in love with a Republican but disowned his child for being involved with a cult leader (which, yea, a bit of a red flag) who also was very much against the Emperor. tbh i feel like Nicholas would not be a fan of that so i kinda hope it would be addressed in that route
kind of like 'seducing-your-sister's-fiancée' route. i like that you can be angry both at your father (who has an affair of his own) and Harry (it takes two to cheat, after all), who got the better end of the deal, or so it seems. and i'm very curious how they got found out, there's obviously a reason why this couldn't have been resolved quietly
it'd be nice if there was an option to exhibit more of a all-cops-are-bastards attitude, especially when meeting the detective one-on-one
like, i'd very much remind him (during the call and/or in person) that i asked for a lawyer and there's none present. i know declining the offer to meet doesn't fit the plot but i'd like to at least be difficult and unwilling haha