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Great work DivineN! Not surprised in the least with your piece getting top marks. Incredible!

let me know if you would like help proofreading. I’d be happy to assist. Your entry was really great. 

the art and writing in this are really solid. there’s definitely been a lot of care and work put into the world building for this setting.  I look forward to seeing what come from it!

very fun adventure. I’ve started to plan when I’m going to run this for my table. Super evocative, and a ton of space for dm creativity while providing a ver solid structure to build on. Could see church’s of this cult spread all around the spheres. 

Small critique would be to go back through for text editing. just a few run ons and missing words. But honestly didn’t detract at all from the flavor. 

both of those descriptions were gold. 

very fun setting. more adventures always. while the corpo setting does initially come across as beige, the flavor of the NPCs, encounters, and enemies is enough to add as much color as you want. 

The OOBLECKIAN REVISIONIST reminds me of a floating blob of white out. Very fun. 

thanks! I really felt like it was walking a thin line, so I’d rather play it safe than sorry. And making it like “virus” in the machine felt like it held with the fiction. 

I’ve not yet seen a lot of cyberpunk material for Troika! so it was a fun play in a new to me setting. Do you know of any cyberpunk settings for Troika I could check out?

I fully agree with this. Don’t game it. Read and treat the voting like giving critiques. That’s how we all get better with future projects. And honestly, if after reading everything and something stands out more, I don’t have any issue with going back and updating a vote to account for the field. 

I think the real thing for me is getting feedback; that’s my reward. I’d love to get “stuff”,  but knowing how to improve my writing, design, graphic design, setting, etc is way more valuable, imho. 

I’ve been working through and voting on everyone one. But kinda setting 3 stars as the baseline, the is good and has some juice. More than 3 and it’s got a lot going for it super evocative, brain tingly. Less than 3 and it might need some work, ideas may need to be fleshed out, etc..

Thanks! That modification might be one of my favorites. 

jmcord

thanks! Seriously, the items were super fun! Had a few good laughs when reading through. 

More adventures are always needed. This one is fun, open-ended, and the additional gambling mini games have many uses outside of this context. Nice work!

Interesting take on utilizing works recently added to public domain. I especially enjoyed  the Crooning Cacodemon and the Romantic Jinx. The bibliography was a great addition since I didn't know most of the references. Really nicely done!

I didn't realize you were passing out art copies for those involved with the jam. I'd love to take a look, though the text alone was vivid enough to get my mind running with imagery! 

Always looking for fun items to fill a shop, with pricing structure to boot. Descriptions are imaginative and will almost certainly encourage equally imaginative usage.

Very fun and evocative setting.  I could very easily see building a campaign around this.