This seems pretty good so far, looking forward to more. Found an error if you try to finish off doom though
Error: the passage "Doom Control Room 6e" does not exist
Forewarning I have just started the game and am only just completing the first convo with the headmaster but my only gripe so far is that it feels like the mc just accepts getting spirited away from their life like way too easily. Don't get me wrong, I get told I can do magic i'm down no matter what but ya know, could've had a whole life going on. However if this changes or there are options to voice issues with it further in the game then just disregard this comment :).
In my opinion this is one of those games where you play through it thinking, "Yeah this is okay" and then you finish it and you realize just how good it was. I've played practically every text based game on itch and this is one of like two that have had accurate depictions of depression. Literally the only character I didn't like was Melrose and that wasn't even because of bad writing, I just didn't like how familiar she was with the mc. Anyways, amazing job, keep it up.
Amazing game, been playing since 0.3 and this newest update was fire!! Def gonna do a replay once its fully completed to do an only alex run and then prob an only Luna one, love all of them but unlike other games this just seems like the type where I don't actually want a harem ending. Keep up the good work!
Very good start I have to say, definitely one of the better of the many demos on this site. Obviously its short but that's to be expected, I quite liked the line where you stand up to James, felt appropriate of a ruler. Lots of subtle hints about characters in their descriptions. Gonna be following you and probably adding this to a collection, keep up the good work
Good concept, feels like things move a bit fast but that's fine considering its just a demo, found a couple glitches if you go with Rae tho, after having chosen the have an interest in her option and then choosing to either hug or do nothing after using your mod to try and escape, the game glitches and resets your interest to nothing. I'll bookmark this, keep working on it :)