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Same

Very cool, maybe this is the first game i'll buy

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I didn't want her to be forgiven but I wanted her to have another kind of punishment, like a prison where she undergoes psychological treatment, as they should study her behavior to prevent something like this from happening again creating some sort of treatment for hybrids, an ending like this seems more believable to me.

harlequinn could you create a link to the pt br translation? A lot of people won't see if she stays down there in the comments (like the project kat page they have a link with only downloadable translations) https://www.mediafire.com/file/0ztlgc1sna0w2ro/A_Wolf_in_Sheep%2527s_Clothing_pt...

yea

I would prefer an ending like that

https://www.mediafire.com/file/0ztlgc1sna0w2ro/A_Wolf_in_Sheep%2527s_Clothing_pt_br.rar/file  Jogo com a tradução pra pt br (precisa do winrar) 

herle said she probably won't do this but maybe someone will make some mod (I will post a translation for example)

Same  lol

But was it really that bad?

Probably?

1. About Anna, this was when she was studying at another school, this happens before the game starts so it makes sense that we only see her for the first time in the dream. 2. According to what harlequinn said (fun facts) this change and the hair change happens because she thinks that animals change completely when they grow up ( as you can see she has a white lock of hair as a teenager, but as an adult she doesn't have )

No problem you can answer whenever you want. There is very little left to finish but I'm out of time so I think I'll just post it tomorrow

that's exactly what i wanted too

If they really were imaginary it would be an amazing plot

Yes, I think she won't mind, it's just a portuguese translation (which I really wanted to do since I loved this game) but I'm not very optimistic that this will be used by many people, but even if only 1 person use it I'll be happy and you saying this is a good idea cheered me up a bit, thanks. I'd say I've translated 60% of the game, when I finish translating I'll just ask a friend to test it (he's never played the game) and see if it doesn't need any correction if it's ok I'll post it in the chat

hm, I don't know, she didn't even answer me about the translation (she doesn't seem to mind), but I'm still doing it I think I'll put the link through media fire in this chat

I already talked about it too but unfortunately it seems she doesn't intend to do another ending ( but I agree that it would be really cool to have other endings )

I think you have a way of writing that makes people feel in the character that's really cool (at least that's what I felt while playing)

It was really cool to have a consequence for her actions (but there was still the possibility that there wasn't, since it's normal for criminals not to get caught sometimes and she only got caught because she lost control), but I think it's funny that you interpreted that as a death sentence, since this is the worst consequence that could have.

Another game that takes place in the same universe sounds like a cool idea

I have to agree with this... i had completely ignored this polishing issue but he really bothers

Cool

you can add me on discord? because it would be better for me to give you the translated file when I'm done

but then when I finish translating how do you want me to give you the translated file?

Thank you, but how do i change the font you set?

I know how you feel, I created an account just to comment here (if you scroll down a little you will see) I also found the end of mercredi very cruel but that was kind of the intention you will understand if you read the discussion below. I really wish there was another possible ending where she was happy or didn't have an ending like that. Maybe a ending with some kind of redemption for her.

i know portuguese so maybe i can try but i never tried to translate a game, so it can be hard but maybe i can if you can help with some things
I went to test it so I managed to translate some things but I still have some problems like: accented letters do not appear in the game, anyway i hope you can help me with this, if you want me to translate you can call me on discord, it's better to talk there( discord: Jill#9995 )

I would like to know if you will post the soundtracks on youtube or if there is a place where i can see them, since i really liked some of them.

Well, in my country there is no death penalty lol, it's not your fault i started thinking about how i would feel if i made a game and someone came to question his logic and I already talked a lot, i thought you might have been a little upset (it was just my anxiety talking, i have serious problems with that) But anyway, i was going to suggest a neutral ending when you talked about secret ending like giving her some kind of "psychological shock" to make her review her actions and stop killing, since she spent 10 years in prison wondering what she did, does she regret it? and in all the years she's been in prison, hasn't she killed anyone because she regretted it? Or maybe she can stop if something really bad happens to her friends because of her, something that makes her think about what she did (like hurting cosette since she loves cosette) so she can stop killing all you need to do is find a way to change your mind (with the psychological shock, maybe some trauma or maybe some treatment because I honestly couldn't accept that there is no treatment for carnivores in a world where they live together)

A secret ending looks really cool. So if she "learns her lesson" she won't have self-control problems anymore? I think you are forgetting the fact that they are not humans. In beastars for example I don't think there is a death penalty for eating someone and there's even a race that doesn't consider it a crime but just nature ( not that it needs to be beastars, i just think you're giving them too humane treatment ) let me know if you feel a little upset with me questioning so many things in your game, is not my intention, i think you did something amazing and unique here.

Maybe if she had some sort of "treatment" for hybrids it could have a different ending since she shouldn't be the first case, or maybe she could better control these impulses with the help of her father. If it doesn't end like this, I can only imagine that she would keep killing until she was arrested and died.  Are you still going to change something or have you finished developing the game?

I understand, but I can't imagine how anyone can be content with death if they haven't managed to kill themselves in those 10 years. That sounds like she hasn't given up yet.

I'll try to think of an alternative, maybe I'll play it again to see if I think of something

wow i think you are a genius this turned out really good since the goal is to be a dark game, but i think it would have given more weight if you had put some lines like "i don't want to die" and she was crying at the end

I think you made a very cruel ending to mercredi but maybe you didn't even realize it since she seemed very calm at the end, imagine how miserable someone would feel knowing that they can't control their impulses and can end up killing whoever they love at any time, imagine how much she hates herself and the anxiety she can feel, thinking about it I think it even makes sense for her to stay calm at the end since she should be wanting to die right now. I think anyone playing this and understanding the situation would be very sorry for her. It's not that this ending is bad, a lot of people like sad and darker endings like this one, but it's not my case, that's why I was saying there should be 2 endings

It's hard to explain what the problem is, but basically I liked the main character a lot more than the others so I didn't want a horrible and sad ending for him, I just wanted an ending where she was happy. This was like the ending of dexter only worse since dexter was happy to die to let his son have a normal life (I thought this ending was realistic, but it could have ended in a different way, you know? I wish had a choice in this ending)

I just saw that the hair is inspired by sweeney todd literally saw this movie today just before downloading the game i think this hair is really cool

This game is just amazing! I can't even describe what I felt playing it, I was never bored for a second. The only thing I would complain is that the ending was frustrating for me, I think it would be better with at least 2 endings instead of just 1 "bad ending"