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I don't have much to say that hasn't already been said. This is the most solid vn in the entire jam. Perfect scores across the board.

Thank you for the feedback, and I agree. If I were writing a story with the premises you provided, I would have to completely rewrite my project as those are completely incompatible concepts with the text and themes of my VN. That said, I did not write the "trapped in a cabin with dwindling supplies" or the "getting hunted down by someone" story. I wrote Astrophobia. While I'm glad you at least felt empathy for my characters, as I attempted to emphasize with the story being in first person present tense, I'm sorry you didn't feel any sympathy for them.

Known issues, please reply if more are found:

Alchahol should be Alcohol. 

Discression should be discretion.

Erroneous text at "...around a central point that resembled a picture." It should read "...around a central point."

Missing space between "...familiar.At the..." should be "...familiar. At the..."

Font choice makes AL look like Ai.

Protagonist name does not need to appear outside of dialogue but does.

TV is missing quotation marks.

Unused sprites left in images folder.

Known issues:

Alchahol should be Alcohol. 

Discression should be discretion.

Erroneous text at "...around a central point that resembled a picture." It should read "...around a central point."

Missing space between "...familiar.At the..." should be "...familiar. At the..."