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Oh I love this! The background art is so fun to look at, and I love the character design for both the main character and the enemies! I also really dig the background music you chose, it feels really fitting! Excellent work!! 

Oh wow, this game actually feels a bit nostalgic! It reminds me of the old platformers I would play when I was a kid, on websites like Nitrome. I love the look of this, the main character is simple yet adorable, and I love the animation for them! The video at the beginning is really effective to set up the premise of the game, and part of the reason it reminds me of the platformer games I played as a kid. Really awesome work! 

This is so beautiful! I played this when you shared the link last week and I'm honestly super impressed? with how much you managed to add since then! The character design and the little animated details on them are beautiful, the scenery feels really expansive and makes me excited to explore this world, and the ending sequence feels really conclusive. Excellent work!!

this has a great environment so far !! the descriptions of Scrup and his environment are very well done, and help me visual the space your story takes place in. i was also very intrigued to learn more about the backstory of Scrup, he seems like a very interesting character !! great work so far! 

i love the watercolor in this !! very unexpected in a game like this and a very nice touch. the sound effects are great too, i love the elevator music, haha. i also like how each ending gives the player the option to start over, it made it a lot easier for me to try every possibility! overall, great work !!

i really love the dark concept of this game + the imagery you're describing !! it's very unsettling and kept me intrigued throughout the game. there's a couple typos i noticed here-and-there, but otherwise very fantastic work !!

i really enjoyed this !! everytime my character died i backtracked because i wanted to see what would happen next if i made the correct decision! i love the use of background images for atmosphere, and my only critique with that is it made the text a little difficult to read on some slides--  not a big deal, just something to think about. i also got an audio error on one slide, but i'm not sure if that's a coding issue or a google chrome issue. overall, well done !!

the art in this game is beautiful !! made me really excited to see who would pop into the frame next, and i really enjoy how expressive the characters were based on what choice the player made. the witty writing style was very entertaining, and the choice of background music was a great fit !! 

i liked the concept for this game, and all the options the game offered !! i noticed that an image on one of the vampire passages didn't show up for me, and the font was a little tough to read at points, but otherwise i really enjoyed it! your writing style worked really well for this game. 

i liked the amount of choices the game had, i went back and checked all of them to see what direction each would take me. i noticed a typo here-and-there [i.e "outway" instead of "outweigh"] but otherwise i think the game is well done !!

gosh i really love the art in this, it's all so peaceful to look at. i also think asking the player's pronouns in the questionnaire section was a nice touch. :^)