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thanks, I hear you... I lose track easy. I definitely recommend the game. 

I didn't realize this would lead to BDSM stuff. Too much for me. Good graphics though. 

This seems like a good game, but my mouse cursor disappears in the game. I have Windows 10 and a fast machine. I adjust the mouse in Windows 10 to be larger and a different color. The instant my cursor enters your game, it disappears. I can still click on things, but I don't know where the mouse cursor is so it's very frustrating. 

Well, I was slowly won over by this comic. It's not my favorite style. I don't like any kind of domineering stuffs going on. But people seem to be able to choose their own destiny if they want. The comic finally won me over because I was given the choice as to whether or not I'm into feet - which I happen not to be. I do not like comics that just put people's feet in my face. This comic asked permission. I'm grateful. Thanks. I'm not familiar with this kind of 3D vs say things done with DAZ studio, but I think I might like this style better than the usual 3D type art. One thing that bothers me about this and all of these style comics is the endless giant boobs and giant butts. They just don't do anything for me, and it seems like the rule that EVERYONE and I mean EVERY. SINGLE. COMIC has to have mostly giant boobs and butts. At least the bodies in this are very beautiful. [edit] There is the usual ... too large breasts for me at least. But this comic actually deals with the idea that women's breasts aren't all the same. 

Thanks for a great comic. When I'm working, I'll donate. 

Thank you!

After reading - many of these kinds of visual novels, this easily ranks among the very top I've read. The characters are interesting and well developed, and the protagonist has depth. I don't usually write these reviews and it's difficult for me to characterize this novel in an "objective" review, because I understand that there are many different kinds of adult visual novels with many different kinds of themes, and people prefer all kinds of different things in these novels.

So, I decided to be subjective in my review, which will also reveal my preferences regarding these kinds of novels. Please understand I recommend this novel for purchase to anyone and everyone who are interested in adult visual novels regardless of any preferences I have.

Pros: 

> The Protagonist is a - good person. This novel does not force the player to chose to be a "bad person" in order to experience the full plot of the story.

> This novel does NOT suffer from the "Giant Boob and Butt Wars" GBBW.... I just made that up, and hope it catches on. Many recent adult visual novels suffer from the "my ridiculous large breasts and butts are bigger than your ridiculously large breasts and butts," war that is happening in comics and visual novels. The breast and butt sizes and shapes here are somewhat different for different characters - just like in real life.

> The story does not shove a bunch of sexual ideas and acts in your face that you may or may not prefer, except for one thing - I don't like, which I won't reference. Sex is part of this novel, but I would say, not the main part of this novel, which I find refreshing. Even though, the sexual aspects of this novel are very exciting and beautiful.

> The story is solid, cohesive and well developed. It's easy to like the good characters in this book and dislike the bad, and to get caught up in their virtual lives. Even though this novel has a lot of story and happenings in it, and took me quite a while to get through it, I was still really bummed when it ended and can't wait for the next installment, which I will gladly buy.

> The characters are absolutely beautiful and if I knew any of these "people" I would want to give them a big hug and thank them for existing in the story. I wish I could be part of this story in real life.

Cons: Please understand that what I say here is completely subjective and is based on - my personal preferences. I understand that my preferences will be contrary to many. But I hope that you can understand at least where I'm coming from, and perhaps that might inform you about the story at least as I see it. Internally, I do not at all disparage anyone for having different preferences than I do.

> Writing - there's too much of it. I'm a big fan of Ernest Hemingway's terse style of writing, and not a big fan of Herman Melville's thick prose. This Novel is thick with verbiage. I have a habit of skipping a lot of the dialog in these kinds of novels because I already know what they are going to say mostly, and regardless, I don't miss much of the story anyway. In this novel I skipped large portions of the dialog and didn't feel like I missed much. I am not into Japanese culture in general, and the possible conventions I see, like overly cutesy complex descriptions of various ... types of beings doesn't reach me emotionally. You'll understand what I mean when I say, I don't like the Lord of the Rings for the same reason. If something can be said coherently in three sentences then I prefer that it not be stretched out into three paragraphs. I'm older and I don't really want to listen to young people, working out their demons, or trying to find the courage to get to the point. I feel like, "come talk to me when you have all that worked out and decide what you're going to do." But... this story, is about many young people who are working things out in their crazy lives, which is wonderful, of course. I'm just older and have already heard that type of stuff many, many, many (many) times. I spend basically zero time thinking about my younger self and it's attempt at "working things out." Even though, and regardless, these younger characters are wonderful.

So there it is. Buy this novel? HELL YES. It's a fantastic work! I love the story, I love the characters, I love the look and very high quality of the renders, and I can't say enough good things about this visual novel.

Many thanks to the developer Vertigo, and congratulations. You hooked me big time. I can't wait for the story to continue.

Sincerely,
Laxr5

I can't  get this. The BEWWWBS are WAY TOO SMALL! If they don't look like Mt. Vesuvius, what's the point?! Why don't you make the bewbs as tall as the women? Or better, just get rid of the women and just have the beewwwwwwbs? 

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Well, I know some people like a lot of words. That's the first thing I see is a page full of words. I'm looking for visual novels, not words novels. Perhaps I had the wrong tag or something?

I'm not going to try this game. I have a new rule. The total bewb weight cannot exceed the absolute weight of the characters upon which they are rendered. I'm very tired of giant bewwwwwwbs. Let's all say it together. bewwwwwwwwwbs. There are some really high quality visual novels out there, and I'm going to say something radical, their quality is not directly proportional to the size of the bewwwwwwbs. Maybe we can make stories where four giant bewbs talk. Once in a while they could bang into each other. Now don't steal my awesome idea!

I, for one, simply applied it to everything. Obviously boobs have grown... always giant boobs. They had to grow at some point. And of course... other things grows, like over times and stuff. Very obvious. beewwwwwwbbbbssssss.

I think this is very interesting, thank you. I like the starkness of it,  and watching what all the particles do.

THANK YOU. Thank you very much. I almost cannot believe I'm hearing anyone saying this. This is exactly why most of these kinds of games do not appeal to me. One of those issues is the "giant boob syndrome." Thank you for standing up for reality. I'm buying your game based on this comment alone.

It's very well rendered, the artistic sensibility is fine. The animations regarding sex are awful. The main character's a bit of a one pump chump. No foreplay, just bangbangbangbang done - "thank you, Mamm. Was I good?" Maam, [thinking: "no freakin' way. You're horrible.] "oh, yeah, you're fine, great." For all the beautifully animated scenes you have why were the sex scenes so amateurish? It's as if the writers have never had to actually please anyone.

I'm an old guy, and don't date anymore. But I used to. Been there. That's why I like - some of these novels. The ones that remind me of what it was sort of like when I was younger. Only I wasn't a spy, and didn't have a harem in a sky scraper accessed by helicopters, with women squirting all over the place and begging to suck me off. I like stories that are less like a raging teen fantasies. So I have an excuse.

Why the hell are you two here looking at this stuff, "correcting me," with all these squirting women out there you're dating? Click, click, click, click....

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This is another hero... harem type thing. The story for the most part is fun and enjoyable. I enjoyed almost all of it. But, as per these types of stories, the male gets everything he wants with no struggle - and is always right, and is always the hero. You can chose some bad things.

The thing I like least about chapter 2  is that it adds to the completely fake idea of "female ejaculation." It's complete bullshit manufactured for guys, and this story supports it. It not only supports it, but it has mansplaining to explain to the "cum dump" females what "squirting" really is. What it really is, is crap invented by the porn industry, that some dummies believe. My life for a realistic artful, adult comic.

Well... I had hopes that it would be fun. People on a new planet. Instead I'm greeted by an abject asshole as one of the crew. Can anyone tell me why the hell I'd want to play a game with a character on a new planet that appears to be a sociopath who - want's to fight me? Did a 10 year old child write this? 

This game... rough animations.

The main character's face many times is grotesque. It's difficult to relate to the character. One main look she has is one of abject disgust. The characters expressions do not line up the present content, in ugly ways. Sometimes as if they are screaming something they might say normally, for example.

The animations are clunky, as in not smooth. They play smooth for part of the animation, then when it loops at same point the animation shifts to the characters in a completely/instant different position. My machine is fast, for information, there's no lag.

I like the themes in the novel. It is interesting that way, and the strange ideas are interesting.

Attempting to get through the story is a slog. It's highly repetitive. I'm also forced to interact with all characters, including some characters I would rather not interact with. Like the big "baby" Dude. I'd like to skip him, but I can't. Not really.

I paid more for this than I usually pay for these kinds of stories, and it definitely was not worth it.

Thanks for the info.

I sort of guessed that. I'm not interested in doing it for money at all, but I'm interested in playing with the software and models a bit, 3D models in general. What do you happen to use for software, and why do you like it, if you don't mind the question. I happen to have a RTX 2070 Super, and it suits my non-heavy lifting needs.

I think I might have that. When you said the title I seem to remember that it was good. I'll look for it.

I really enjoyed your work on this.

I'm fairly new to these kinds of games/stories. What kind of computer equipment do have to do these renders? I read about it a bit and was suprised at how much effort it takes to create these games.

From my perspective of being relatively new to these types of story games (I've gone through about 20) this one is the best. I really felt for the characters in their situations. I found the renders captivating. I purchased the game on Steam, and highly recommend it.