I must first ask: when will Ray's route be out?! Congrats on creating a good game in such a short time frame! I must say that Lawrence is my favorite route; he seemed to have some character progression and had a mature storyline.
[Spoliers AHEAD]
Overall, I wish there was more development of characters, some endings seem anti-climatic. For instance, (SPOILERS!!) Leonard's ending of his interest being a contentious point in the story, was a bit odd to me. If there were more scenes exploring why his interests were an issue other than: "that's creepy for an older person to like". At the end of his route, I was curious why such an issue was; since it is a common anime/visual novel trope. Additionally, the stalking only resolved in two routes, leaving me wanting more.
Regardless, y'all worked extremely hard on this product! The art is amazing and with a further developed storyline, I would buy this product!