I don't know where else to put this and sorry in advance for being that person, but, there is a misspelling in the backstory. "lone" should be loan. Again, sorry.
Also will achievements be added to the game? If not I believe achievements would make the game more interesting and be appreciated by all the perfectionists who like to 100% games.
Minor spoiler? - I was a little underwhelmed when I got myself arrested at the beginning of the game and chose the game over option thinking there may be achievements to collect, otherwise why give the option to end the game so early.