Oh, right! There was one time when it was saturday, I had already missed rent couple times by that point (the rent was 450$) and landlord just straight up told me that I didn't have enough cash when there was actually more than needed.
Also, pretty sure a lot of money-related stuff doesn't work properly.
Courses seem to be completely free despite pricetag of 100$.
Not bad, some good decisions, a lot of underdeveloped ones, clunky, a bit tedious but short and cute, left me with good feeling of your author-potential. Some critical points that I've got:
1) My gosh there should be a notification like "HEY! IT'S SATURDAY! PAY UP OR ELSE...". It's so easy to just lose track of weekdays since you're always in a loop of schedule a video->buy stuff->work->sleep->repeat, there's nothing to do otherwise anyway.
2) You plan to add more comments? Do they even matter? As of now there's almost 0 incentive to look at them.
3) Some basic dialogues for day-to-day interactions could be nice. Like you come to her place but she just ignores you, some friend she is!
4) You talk about her career (it's main gameplay, mind you!) exactly 2 times: in the beginning and when sponsorships become available. After that... So long and thanks for the fish I guess?
Overall it's not too bad for your first public game, but I feel like there's almost no reason to actually adress any of my points (except 1st one maybe? Should be pretty easy to do). You can spend enormous amounts of time polishing it, but I highly doubt there's a room for your creation to be something bigget than what it already is. My IMHO - just move on to the next thing, I'm pretty sure you can make it much better. Also, big up for making 3D eroge! Really excited to see what you and Acestudio will come up with in the future.
