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hindsight note: DAMMIT I ALREADY USED THE PALPATINE QUOTE IN MY FIRST REVIEW

ToT

IM SORRY I NEED TO FIND A NEW QUOTE WHEN CHAPTER 6 COMES OUT

HELLO HELLO

meliodas is back again for chapter 5

(wheeze) this harem- i mean friend group for our MC is incredibly awesome
rune seems like such a fancy (gal, i made them a gal in my playthrough) mage

had to restart from the beginning so I speedran it as Fiorayne again, named the horse Luchika and the wolf Rondine. if you didn't see my first comment i'm a huge monster hunter nerd LOL. 

however if i had to choose my favorite oswin is just him
childhood friend who's risking his ass to save us and him talking about how he felt "useless"
resonates with me fr

current ranking of our mc's party

1. oswin (i vibe with him heavy)
2. rune (she's cool. also i love bard characters)
3. duri (he's such a silly, getting bitten by my horsie luchika)
4. zahn (he's so sweet and precious aaaaaaa)

all 4 of them are absolutely excellent and i would gladly befriend any of them

can't wait for god-cursed to finish because I AM GOING TO PLAY THROUGH IT MULTIPLE TIMES

mrs lunan your writing is incredible and you have me invested so badly
you truly are a brilliant writer fr <3

in the words of Senator Palpatine

"We will watch your career with great interest."

also i do hope you enjoyed the monster hunter rise soundtrack!!! really gives more atmosphere when I read, cus I listen to music that's appropriate whenever I read something story (chill music for most parts, fight music for fights, and other thematically appropriate songs)

that's enough yapping from me

Love, LightningMeliodas

P.S. [i'm writing my own IF story and coding is incredibly painful. tips would be very much appreciated].

Rest well! Your health is so valuable, and we're still gonna be here when you get back! Get well soon!

peak fiction fr ToT I AM SOSOSO INVESTED TO SEE HOW THIS TURNS OUT!!!!

comments on our companions/ROs

(playing with a female character for now)
oswin: he's got that dawg in him but i like his protective spirit
zahn: such a goofy goober, love him
duri: why does he remind me of gale and halsin from BG3 at the same time

i love the dads and lakota sm!!! they really make me feel like my character got the love she needs to keep going!

and i love my horsie Luchika ofc :3

keep it up!!! I really am invested to see how this goes!
if there's one thing i can recommend

listen to some music when writing <3 really helps get you into the vibe of what you write... i personally listened to the MHRise soundtrack while reading because oml it fit well with my character (fiorayne)...

but enough yapping from a monster hunter nerd... ENJOY THIS PEAK! i'm rooting for you!! and in the words of palpatine... "We will watch your career with great interest."

-love, LightningMeliodas, just a random monster hunter nerd and avid gamer.