It was not completely playable from the first page when I initially posted this, but I reworked it so it all fit onto the first page :-) Thanks for the quick response!
The way I've organized (and stuffed) my rules sheet has led me to put NPC rules, environment design, and other bits for the GM on the back page. Is this faux pas? I've designed the game to be playable with about 10-20 minutes of prep, but deeper prep is available if it's appealing to the GM. I'm not sure if this is the right place to submit this sort of thing if this is looked down upon.
