Really good story and I like how there is a choice, but it did drag on and there were periods where it felt like nothing was happening. I just think there should be more stuff to do to pass the time or more objectives to keep the player's attention like sweeping around the store or putting VHS tapes back in their category because it would just engage the player more.
This is a cool project! You did well, especially for it being your first project. Most of the time when someone makes their first game its unplayable, but this is really good! if this was polished more, and had a story to go along with it, it could definitely be a fully developed game.
