She's a cutie! Her eyes are much better (good alignment, less ditzy), and I like the slightly sharper nose and accented lips. Her collarbones look a bit long, and I'd add some extra highlights to her arms/legs as you've done the chest for that "sea-sprayed look". But overall, nice improvements!
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Looking good! Some comments that came to mind:
- I can't seem to use the mouse to select battle actions (Attack, etc). I don't always like using the keyboard, and sometimes I prefer mirroring to a tablet using Steam Link etc and mouse events are important there.
- I wish there was a way to either Struggle or speed through the h-events, as the timing feels a bit long on the h-animations. Normal skip buttons don't seem to work.
- It would be nice if she made a longer orgasm noise / face at the end of the animations. That part feels too fast. Or maybe some other faces or arm movements as she progresses through the animation?
- I like the new "find and attack" approach of the slimes in the forest, vs the older abrupt detection area.
- Some kind of "dodge" animation might be nice when the enemies miss.
- Love the subtle bounce effects.
- EDIT: Also would love if battle-damaged clothes persisted over the next battle, depending on current HP.
Great work! Excited to try with multiple outfits and enemies. Cheers!