I just finished game fpr then first time, romanced Health. I don't know if there is a good end for him but I reall like my end. I didn't followed him in his betrayal (I'm a firm believer of the Camarilla both for the Vampire and the Human, so I was not going to betray the Iskari in this univers) and remain at Saorie's side. Really like that he has vanished of my unlife and that my character coul say that bit by bit, she think less and less of him, like he will stay a bittersweet memory but nothing less.
Markus was right somehow, she was with him BECAUSE of his humanity, but as she embrace her vampiric nature, it was logical that she distance from him (the end was passionnate but ephemere). So, I don't know if that could have turned better, but this last view, at Saorie's side, was fullfilling.
I must ask, if Saorise and her Iskaris are Camarilla and Randal and the Mavvar the Arnach's, Andrei is the Sabbat right? If so, I mut say that he is one of the best Sabbat representant I ever seen. I almost wanted to join him (unilike these crazy bastard in Bloodlines 1, their were really good antagonist but Sabbat is more subtil and corrupting in book).
Your Anarch's were right in the spot too. Really nice philosophie, charismatic leader but really not viable in the futur.
Camarilla are son of bitches but even if I really don't like them, all my vampire character could see that their laws were really useful AND essential both for Vampiree society and Human society... but yeah, I do agree with anarch somewhere, they are generally full of shit and insufferable...