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Hi! I just wanted to check to make sure, but is it ok to use the pocketfold format in a commercial project? I didn’t see it explicitly stated, and I wanted to make sure that I’m not doing you dirty after you shared such an incredibly cool thing with the community!

Hi! The numbers in parenthesis are the number of rounds loaded – i.e. a Clockwork Musket can fire 4 times before it needs to be loaded.

Thank you so much for putting this out! It looks great!

Just out of curiosity, is use of this grid in a commercial product permitted?

Straight forward and simple, there’s nothing in this that doesn’t need to be, and it isn’t missing anything that it needs to have. Looks like it would be incredibly easy to run, and a great way to introduce 0 level characters into the idea of adventuring for treasure.

Really cool illustrations and a neat concept!

Extremely cool! A fantastic idea, with great execution. Clear and easy to follow. I’m excited to see the rest of the classes!

Absolutely love this. It’s clear and concise, but the prose is evocative (I especially like the description of the denizens of area 5). The new creatures are cool and deadly in ways that are sure to terrify the players. The ONLY critique that I have is that area 5 mentions a pathway to access “area 8” which is not included in this adventure. I completely understand WHY it isn’t, but I’ll admit that it took me going back to the map a couple of times before I realized that area 8 is a part of the larger dungeon complex in which this particular section resides, so a parenthetical note there would have helped me a lot.

Overall, 5/5. I’m going to run it.

Overall a solid one shot! Great concept, easy to follow.

Nice work!

Overall I really like it. It clear, reasonably concise, and captures the feeling of the dual-wielding, panther accompanied ranger that is such a staple of early fantasy. Formatting is easy to follow, and the art is great!

Well done!

Thank you so much!