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lovelyInq

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A member registered Feb 23, 2022

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When I play on my phone, there's this big menu banner and I cant fingure out how to move it/close it

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The ending on the first page, the ending on the second page (i chose the 2 option on the fjrst page, if it matters). It does seem to me like Arke appears twice 

some bug report: 1)  when talking to advisers in the first chapter, there are several choices "why?", "Must I?", etc. If I choose the first one, it sends me on a loop, the second choice moves the story forward. 2)Arke appears twice in the 2 chapter in the town watch scene, when it should be just once. At first, you see him behind some trees and you get a choice about how angry you're towards him. On the next page, you're left alone and Arke suddenly appears.

I feel like the game doesnt really work for MCs that don't want to be there/have a lot of negative feelings around the whole affair (the game gives you choices to have these feelings of being scared and upset). Like, MC got kidnapped by Maz, forced into a truck by Sunny, then threatened into coming to a meet up by D - at this point in game, I would not be laughing at these people's jokes, I would not be helping them out with a car, I would not be cordial with them, but MC is doing all that, despite of the choices you make

If i may offer stylistic adive: divide your long sentences into smaller ones to help with pacing for reading. F.e., you have sentences with 5-6 clauses, they easily can be split into 2-3 sentences.