What a hidden gem we have here !
Who knew a guy stuck in his room could have so much potential as an interactive story. I liked how jovial the writing is whilst carefully handling a very touchy subject.
The subtle buildup of tension between transitions, and the constant creeping presence creates such a surreally oppressive atmosphere. Yet in contrast, you have all this with tightly writ banters between the duo.
The back-and-forwards is entertaining all throughout and got me a good few chuckles. The tone is light-hearted at certain moments and whole-heartedly earnest when it counts.
By the end, it certainly feels like a neatly written and poignant personal piece. Wherever you are by now, I hope you're doing okay 🫂
Love to see more from you ;)