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This novel is GOOD!!! After following this novel for the past year I gotta say, I loved returning to this story after each new update. The vibe it takes is cool and it makes being a private investigator so interesting. There's memorable characters, there's tension & stakes, and a lot of pieces to think about in the plot. The music is good too

Very well made piece. What y'all are making is awesome 👌

Just got around to reading this novel and I gotta say its AMAZING! Super well made and has a ton of charm to it. The cast is just awesome, and Arthur is a great main character. Also the art is also super crisp too👌

This is the first VN I've read that has voices in it, and I liked it. I ended up growing really accustomed to it. Didn't know it was something I needed in a VN until I read this one.

This VN felt very smooth to read and I can't wait to see what's in store next after that cliffhanger.All hail the himbo horse!!!!!!!!

Any more updates on the artist? I hope they made a full recovery and is doing well after a few weeks?

Just finished reading and I gotta say its great! Very modern, very polished VN! I like how there's a lot of small moments and details in this VN that are charming and memorable. I really liked this scene in particular when delivering mail to the tribe:

Can't wait to see how the story pans out! This is a hidden gem for sure. Good soup!!!

This VN is SOLID👌💎!!! Ya'll nailed the mystery/haunted town atmosphere perfectly. Feels akin to something like: Stranger Things, Wayward Pines, Goosebumps, Twilight Zone etc. I also love what y'all have done with the characters. They all have their own charm to them that makes em memorable.

The pronunciation system you guys added is a nice touch. And explaining cultural pieces throughout the writing really adds a lot to the novel. I can't wait for the next build! I can't get enough of Raymond, The Malaysian Tiger 🇲🇾

Thats perfectly fine dude! Making a VN takes a ton of work. This VN is absolutely worth the wait

The King responded!! 💯

Of course man! You deserve all the love for such a wonderful novel you've made. If I could, I would erase my memory just to have a fresh playthrough again. Can't wait to see what surprises you have in store for these next builds!

Just finished all 3 routes after following Shelter's updates for a year, and honestly.....this is one of the best FVN's out there dude! The endings are hilarious with Alon. The way the choices, Minigames and QuickTime events affect the story is nice! The backstories are very emotional and made me care about Shelter and its characters. The Action scenes are some of the best....nah they ARE THE BEST! Shelter is so innovative and original!

This is also one of the few FVN's where I enjoyed reading the NSFW scenes since they were so creative. This VN's music is also Amazing!!

If you're reading this I want you to know that you and all who supported did a stellar job! I love how you included fanart at the end of each update and news for upcoming builds. Really added a cool personal touch to this masterpiece

ADHD or TLDR: 10/10 VN would recommend yada yada amen 🙏❤️

I just started reading this after forgetting it was on my bucket list for far too long (a war crime). And I gotta say LS is one of THE BEST fvn's out there!! This one really sticks out. The characters, setting and humor blend together perfectly, and really grew on me. I've never laughed at a novel as much as this one.

Compliments to the chef that COOKED this masterpiece! 🔥

This VN is pure art. It explores the concept of closure very well. I can't put my finger on it, but I feel, sad? melancholy? I definitely feel some type of way after reading it that I haven't felt from reading other VN's, and it's beautiful.

Just read this VN and WOW!! It really surprised me. The art style, characters, and setting add a unique charm to the story. Definitely one of the most unique VNs I've read. The choices all feel like they have stakes to them, and I'm never 100% comfortable choosing. This VN is a hidden gem and I can't wait to see what's next.  

This is also random, but I love the shoes the characters are wearing in this VN! It just makes complete sense.

I just finished reading and I gotta say I'm sad to see that its over. The ending was so sweet. This VN was pretty deep and emotional at times and I really liked the characters a lot. The 2 choices at the end of the phone call with dad especially, held SOO much weight to it. I just sat there staring at the screen for 5 min unsure what to click. Imma miss my Brucey, Drayden and everyone needs someone like Redline or Buckey in their life. Sad to see them go.

This VN is as solid as Bruces Jaw! 5 stars!

Started reading this gem about a week ago and finished it today. I'm obsessed with this VN! The demon mechanic of the story is amazing, and the squad of characters are all great. I can't wait to see all 6 parts of that deadly sins wheel glowing ☀️

Can't wait til the next update 👌

This is becoming one of my favorite VN's as of late. The general vibe, characters and setting are a treat to read and experience.  The music also rocks too👌

I love the complexity of the story. It's like one big puzzle, and once you piece together the info for yourself it really adds a lot to what the characters are saying. It makes the world feel more alive and moving. I also loved the map inclusion in this past update too.

The only small fix I would make it to highlight an important word or phrase the first time it's mentioned. Then once you click on it takes you to the LOOM description immediately. I feel that would help with the flow of the story a little bit.

Otherwise I love everything else, and I can't wait until the next update! This VN is a gem. Keep up the great work 💎