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I really want to like this (and the reviews on the IF forum make it sound really good!) but as a non-parser player I have no idea what I'm doing.  A list of verbs might help?  I couldn't seem to find any way to interact with any objects other than picking them up and putting them down again (save for throwing, which only seemed to work on one thing).

Also (and spoilers!) examining the faucet didn't do anything.  Neither did turning it.  I imagine I have to in some way break the floor in the kitchen first, but I couldn't find any way to do that.

Also also: the font issue isn't that much of a problem given that the engine has themes built in.  Maybe just highlighting that would be a good idea?

Oh I'm so sorry.  I've no idea why that would be (it works fine on my own Chrome) :(

There's a chance it's intentional and I'm just an ignorant philistine.

I really really like these.  But I thought you should know that around the 27 second mark of Silence there's a slight audio glitch.

Manon, is this a cry for help?

Ah yes, The you'll last ever book write.

But seriously, as a writer, this prompt gives me instant anxiety.  Well done.

I am really looking forward to someone excepting the Charm Challenge: make a single game using all of Charm's seeds.  Can it even be done?  Is there anyone mad enough to try it?  Only time will tell...

I really like the idea of multiple people using this as a seed, I'd love to see how different people interpret it differently. Also a really nice idea for an 'accompanying seed', something that authors can use with other seeds, a character rather than a whole story outline.

I'd love to take credit for how it looks but that goes to the folks over at Inkle.  Default Ink just looks really nice!  As for the endings, I think that I'll leave it ambiguous about whether they're supposed to be ambiguous ;)