Hiya! Writer here! I would happy to help with this- I can even show you some samples of my writing from a game I created on Twine, if you're interested.
I've played Royal Alchemist so I had high expectations to begin with, but you blew them right out of the water! I love the art and the characters and I can't wait to learn more about the awesome world you've created. Keep up the hard work!
My only reservation concerning this game stems from the choices - of which there is a limited range. Moreover, they don't appear often enough in the game, which makes the heroine appear a little rigid and makes it difficult for the player to establish a unique personality in her.
The soundtrack, art and graphics were exquisite. I'm already hooked on the plot. The potential love interests are excellent because they don't cater to the typical character archetypes found in most otome games. The animations must have taken a lot of effort but they definitely enhanced the beauty of this game. In addition, the level of historical detail and knowledge makes the game extremely immersive.
I'm really anticipating the release of the full game! Keep up the hard work!
The art is amazing, and I really love the story thus far! The characters are really well established and likeable. I look forward to the release of the full game!
