Fantastic game, a great way to represent favouritism, and the forthcoming collapse of the Afton family.
To me, when it comes to William in this game, it's a mixture of the canon lore/events, while using Squimpus' realistic interpretation of his character.
I'm sure many fans would love to see this as a full game, all leading up to the '83 incident and a rollercoaster of emotions.
My only criticism is to lower the amount of cussing in this game, this'll make it easier for family-friendly YouTubers.
Overall, this game has great potential with it's writing, and I hope to see more of what you make in the future. Take care now!