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Dev has used up his second chance by now.
Game is dead.

You need to proofread your work.
Or better yet, get someone fluent in English to do it.

Interesting project.
If I may.
Let the user decide where to install please.

This game is a fever dream xD

What a terrible logic.

For what?

Heyo.
You need to learn the difference between "There" "Their" "They're"
"To" "Too" "Than" "Then"
Or get someone to proofread for you.

That being said I'm enjoying the novel so far.

I've said it before and I'll say it again.
If a dev is using Itch for their game they have an obligation to keep their Itch page up to date if they want to be taken seriously.

Apparently not.

Haha honestly I didn't. Nice :D

Hey I made you a compliment sandwich. I was plenty of nice ;)

It could also have been a hell of a lot worse.
You new to the internet? ;)

Heyo.
Game's good so far.
Story is interesting.
Characters are likeable.

But your proofreading needs a bit of work.
I mean misspelling "doctor" is embarrassing really :P
"alot" is not a word. Literally doesn't exist.
And I'm assuming you just flipped a coin for using either "a" or "an"
Also don't directly translate a German idiom. "sicheren Tod" is "certain death" not "safe death" xD Even Google translate knows that :P
Lastly, and this one you should know since you Germans (I'm assuming you're German) are so fond of capitalizing every noun; names are capitalized in English. That includes the names of countries.

I'm honestly not trying to be an ass. Just trying to help you improve

And I really did enjoy the game.

PS. English is my 3rd language, German my 2nd ;)

Better late than never :D

If you want to be taken seriously and appear professional as a developer you
1. stick to your word
2. support your game on EVERY platform you use for it.

If the dev has an Itch page for it, I shouldn't have to go trawl through the internet to find the release he has promised.

Edit:
Don't get me wrong I appreciate you pointing out that it's available elsewhere.
You were just trying to help.
Also I appreciate the work that's gone into this VN. I've enjoyed so far and am looking forward to future updates.

Wasn't something supposed to happen October 22nd at 7pm UTC?
Weird. Must have been my wild imagination. ;)

Splendid!

Heyo.
I've been enjoying this "game" of yours and I'm excited for the next update.

If I can be so bold as to give you some constructive criticism:
Don't give the player a "choice" if there is no choice.
A button that just says "forward" and no other buttons to press offers nothing mechanically or for story telling that the normal click/enter/spacebar couldn't have done as well.

Anywho, keep up the good work. It's appreciated.

Happy to hear that!

Hey buddy.
Characters looked good so I decided to give this a go.
But your English is atrocious. That means bad.
Get yourself a proper translator (and no google is not proper) to proof your work.
If you fix it I'll give it another shot, cause it really does look good.

What I assume they mean when they say compressed is the images and videos used are compressed.
IE instead of all images being 4k they're 1080p.

Fairly deceiving to tag the game "released" don't you think?

You seem quite insecure there mate.

Dummkopf

I broke your AI in two sentences.
Corrected its spelling mistakes and it gave me a server error.

It's spelled "masturbate"

The week (in which you promised an update come hell or high water) is almost over mate ;)

Back in the mine with you! xD

This game broke my fucking heart

New background image is MUCH better for reading. Well done!

Dude, You SERIOUSLY need some one competent to translate for you. It is impossible to follow the conversations.
Also the background image for this page is horrible. It's difficult to read anything here.

In one interaction with Gabriella the MC tells her he's Jacobs son. She doesn't believe you and gets angry at him and storms off.
Next interaction she's angry at the MC because he apparently told her he didn't want to help her anymore.

Is continuity too difficult for you?

Oh. That's because the dev is a predatory asshole.
Don't support them tbh.