5 days?
Last devlog: Dec 27 2023
Morilivaria
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Heyo.
Game's good so far.
Story is interesting.
Characters are likeable.
But your proofreading needs a bit of work.
I mean misspelling "doctor" is embarrassing really :P
"alot" is not a word. Literally doesn't exist.
And I'm assuming you just flipped a coin for using either "a" or "an"
Also don't directly translate a German idiom. "sicheren Tod" is "certain death" not "safe death" xD Even Google translate knows that :P
Lastly, and this one you should know since you Germans (I'm assuming you're German) are so fond of capitalizing every noun; names are capitalized in English. That includes the names of countries.
I'm honestly not trying to be an ass. Just trying to help you improve
And I really did enjoy the game.
PS. English is my 3rd language, German my 2nd ;)
If you want to be taken seriously and appear professional as a developer you
1. stick to your word
2. support your game on EVERY platform you use for it.
If the dev has an Itch page for it, I shouldn't have to go trawl through the internet to find the release he has promised.
Edit:
Don't get me wrong I appreciate you pointing out that it's available elsewhere.
You were just trying to help.
Also I appreciate the work that's gone into this VN. I've enjoyed so far and am looking forward to future updates.