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I am interested in this, but ten dollars is a lot of money for a smut game with only solo animations.  I know there is a combat system.  Are there any scenes of the mobs shoving Aurora in a locker or dipping her in a toilet after defeating her? 

I paid for the nine dollar version; but the file size exceeded what I can transfer over Mega.  Is there any alternative way I can download it?

Heyo.  Been poking around the early parts for a few hours now.  Past Simon.  I haven't done anything else in the main story, so I can't say anything else about it.  This seems really promising and I'd be willing to pay for the full release at some point.  As a professional nitpicker and not-developer, I'd like to offer up some of my oh so necessary advice.  The dialogue is pretty good from what I've seen so far.  You clearly used both hands to write it and it's the better for it.  Some of the harassers talk like Robot Chicken characters trying to compliment a prostitute, but it's literal porn.  But porn can also be art.  Speaking of art, the visuals.  Samantha Bin Laden is a solid design and concept... so far.  (Keep in mind that I'm writing this after closing it for the first time.)  I really like that you're just some dead asshole who forgot to buckle their seatbelt and that's why you get the fantasy storyline.  You could have just had it open with some "little girl, big apple" business, but this has style.  I also like that you start off as a pudgy, little dough creature.  As a former fat kid, stopping the porn game to get my character in good enough shape to smile in the mirror was wild.  I actually stopped caring about the erotica for a solid hour while I tried to speedrun post-apocalyptic I-fasting.  Again, that's pretty fancy.  I kind of wish that Sam would get more definition in her arms and legs upon reaching swollen enlightenment, but that's just me.  I apologize for how long this is getting.  I promise I'm getting to the end.  I also wanted to touch on the school aspect.  I think that you should keep fleshing it out in case players favor it to your main storyline.  Remember how everyone who played The Witcher 3 brings up the Booboo Baron quest?  Remember that stupid kid that got turned into a dog in Fullmetal Alchemist?  Me neither.  In any case, I think it can work into the main storyline in a way that isn't necessary, but can better flesh out her descent into, uh... sluttiness?  The bullying is a really good idea.  I think you should create portraits for the bullies and expand the role of abuse via peer group.  There's a scene where a dude lures her to the bathroom and diddles her.  He cooms.  She cries.  That's it.  Nothing else happens.  Samalongadingdong just goes home and gets ready for school the next day.  Moreover, you can be going around covered in bruises and with blood coming out of your eyeholes.  How none of the other students, let alone your dance friends don't react feels like a wasted opportunity to me.  Maybe you could even write reactions from your sister and perhaps these roommates when you come home crying and purple.  I feel like there's some way that the school harassment side-story can be used to develop Sam's character and perhaps open up dialogue options in the main quests that otherwise wouldn't have been there.  Like how if there's a mission you would've lost your virginity in, but got raped beforehand, Sam mutters something about having nothing to give the man or perhaps some kind of profane generality about men, or just meat heads.  This has a lot of potential and I won't even pretend to understand what you'd have to do to implement any of the things I've just mentioned, but I felt it was worth saying.  Thank you for putting this out for free. 

Oh, cool.  As long as it's in the crosshair. 

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