that's fair enough! I'm not sure I'd like to even look in the general direction of the stuff I wrote when I was younger. 👀
I do understand why the events chapter 10 had to happen as heartbreaking as it was 💔
thank you so much for replying !
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oh my gosh that was amazing 🥹 the ending made me a little emotional I'm so happy it all worked out in the end, though I wish it could have worked out for fawn and bison. they'd be so proud to see how far everyone got ☹️
I really loved how you wrote everything from the plot to the characters, and the music was a perfect addition 🫶 I'll be excited to see more projects in the future !! I'd also love to read the novella version of this if it ever gets published !! thank you so much for this ❤️ I'm pretty sad to of finished it already but I'll be thinking about this for a while now haha
oh my god. this story has be INSANE so far. the way you write the panic and anxiety the mc goes through is just incredible and realistic. you have such an amazing way of describing it all. the plot, the characters, the amount of choices the player gets to make are all just perfect. and the romance routes!!!! the way you write the love is so genuine. personally i'm following the A romance route and i loveeee it, its all so genuine and sweet and real, i literally kick my feet and giggle every time they share a moment together. i cannot even begin to say how much i love this, i can't WAIT to see what you write next after reading chapter 11. i'll be replaying this straight away to see other outcomes!!! thank you sosososo much for this, i'm literally your biggest fan ❤️ hope you're doing well!! thank you again 🫶