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That's a good game, I like it ! It must has been hard to create, especially since it's for a gamejam. Just be careful, if we hold the space key, the player can fly and see the whole level and solve it more easily. Besides, in the beginning, the text is a little hard to see, maybe write it in black instead of white ? 

Good job !

Hi everyone,

I need feedback on my first game, DollyPuzlle : https://narrosk.itch.io/dollypuzzle?secret=cqZY2T5PR1Z3E3JdbTQCbi6rKI

It's a puzzle game with Russian dolls. You must find her sisters and then join the exit. Beware, when you move forward you only stop if you encounter an obstacle, which may complicate your plans.

For now, there are only 6 levels (and a tutorial), but it's hard to judge the difficulty of a level. I'm afraid they're either too simple or too complicated. That's why I need you. 

I did everything myself except for the musics/sound effects and I'm a newbie so any comment will help me.

(I'm not a native speaker, sorry for all my mistakes. My game is in French, but don't worry there aren't many texts in the game, it shouldn't be a problem - just skip the tutorial, it's not necessary)

Good day to you !

(PS : Here is a level example)

Hi ! That's a little cool game, I really appreciate it, nice idea ! Good job for creating it ! I totally agree with Fiver Rah, nothing more to say. Another random idea : you could have a grid where some light are already turned off. 

And yeah, I also found the higher levels difficult. I just got stuck on level 4, quite frustrating x)