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Wow, it feels like a demo of a retail game. It's so polished and there is so much personality in the characters. The mood and style are really fun.

It's interesting having a shotgun weapon so you need to get close to enemies. The game starts easy and scales up well. I don't think it's possible to die? The dash is pretty cool, but sometimes it put me in a tight spot among a lot of enemies. Wasn't sure how it worked, if it on a cooldown, or something else.

I liked the effects in the game. They look great without being overwhelming, especially the neon bloom. I'd love to see even more chaos and explosions.

I don't see a build posted on the page?

I saw the Post Jam Jam on Discord and made an account just to comment on this game. Wow!

The game is polished, and the audio and art are good. What stood out was the writing. You've created a compelling world in such a short experience and the setting, the style, the dialogue show a great talent for writing. I finished the game in one sitting.

My only suggestion is rather than worldbuilding as a reward for finding an ending, maybe it could be something the player can find during the game? Like the part about souls being reborn, or Laura's motivation (all we know before the ending was she disappeared and we don't know why). I probably would have made different choices if I knew these things.

I'm excited to see you take this story and world further.