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Hi! First of all, i'm loving the story for now! I'm so excited to continue to reading! The plot and the world is very interesting. 

Also maybe you know about this but, just in case, in chapter 2 when Callen is scolding you for coming home alone with Sam the third option gives some type of error.

I played it with high and low relationship with Sam, but it seems the error stays.

I finish the demo today and for now i'm loving it so much!

 I really like the form you write and the characters are very likeable, Oswin is so funny when you're playful with him, and Zhan is so sweet, I wanna take care of them (even if i'm a little cautious  of them)

But in my top of characters for now are the MC parents, I love them so much, they feel so warm?  Idk how to explain it, just they feel like home. 

Also I love the mule, I have to try the others horses but for now my girl Epona is winning.

For resume, great job! I will waiting happy for more!^v^

And my condolences for you loss, I hope you and your husband get well soon