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Thank you!

And I never heard of this book! With a title like that, I would expect it to be more similar to my other project, but after reading the summary I can understand why EE reminded you of this book

Ah! Thank you for playing and for your nice words! <3

I feel like there's more to be done to the story, not including adding The Moon path, until it's finished and\or I'm satisfied with it, but it makes me really happy to know that you enjoyed it!

Thank you!

I don't have a set date, but it should be out somewhere this spring.

No worries about the late reply and thank you for taking your time to write this!

Your words actually made me want to add a plot point\an additional scene to the endings that I previously scrapped (mostly because of time)... I have hopes that it might help with some problems you listed, but if not, at the very least it might make endings more complete.

Outside of that, I'm not completely sure if the rewrite of the endings will solve all problems, but I'll keep in mind what you said so that I might fix this in other ways.

Thank you yet again for your interest in this story, and your comments are very helpful! <3

Thank you so much! <3

Thank you so much for this lovely comment! Although you're the first to tell me about mistakes with pronouns, I'm not surprised that there's something wrong with them (it would be a miracle if there were no pronouns errors...). I hope to fix this with the next update, though!

Thank you for playing and I hope you'll enjoy the moon's part (once it's out)~ <3

Hello! Thank you so much for your interest in the story and for your feedback!

If you think that their relationship was rushed, I'm very much open to adding more interactions between Sol and Luna! But adding more scenes between them is something that I'll work on last, probably, since there are other more pressing matters that need to be changed.

And I'm definitely going to do something with the time skips (maybe adding something like "Later that day"), and I'll see what I can do so that scenes don't end abruptly.

As for endings, I already have some plans to change them somewhat: expand on them and make them more of "show don't tell", plus I want to add one small scene with the spouse. If you have something else to add to that, I'll be happy to read about it!

Thank you so much for the kind words!

You're right that the characters were children at the start of the story, but then there was a time skip that isn't as obvious as I hoped it would be. I'll see if I can make it more apparent.

I haven't had much time to properly edit the text (and even if I had more time I'm sure I would not see all errors), so I'm sorry for the grammatical mistakes\typos and I hope that they weren't too jarring!

And thank you for bringing up the coding issues! I only knew about $sun.coloreyes, so the rest is new to me. And unfortunately the "You should stop meeting them," showing up when you didn't tell about Luna is a "bug" too (well, if me forgetting to code it in counts as a bug) - there should have been a slightly different dialog with parents.

Thank you for checking out the game and leaving the feedback! I greatly appreciate it~

In character creator, there are options to choose a general form of the face and lips. Don't these options add what you want (or close to it)? In the future, I might change slightly how "rounded" face looks like and I might change eyes a little (but they'll be changed for everyone), but I don't have plans to add anything more.

If that's not for your liking (which is perfectly understandable!), I advise you to hide the portrait and imagine your character however you like. It is, after all, a text-based game!

And thank you for enjoying the game and stay safe, too!

Thank you! I hope you'll enjoy the future content~

I'm not sure if I should say "I'm happy you liked the game so much you almost broke your mouse" ahaha, but thank you for playing it~

And thank you for reporting this! This (and a bunch of other mistakes) will be fixed with the next update.

Bonjour! Thank you for the interest and this nice comment! <3 I hope you'll continue enjoying playing with an evil MC~

Thank you for your interest and kind words!

I hope that the bad grammar didn't hinder your enjoyment of the story too much. I can't wait to properly look for beta-readers\players so that this will stop being the problem (or at the very least minimize it)

Thank you again! <3

Thank you! It's always nice to see that people are interested in more of this~

Thank you! I'm glad you're excited for more~

Hi! It is okay to ask such questions, yes~

So without giving out too much, there are multiple endings, some of them might be just the thing that you want. I'll also add that while this story is about the main character who is a villain, I wanted to give different ways of playing this character, and I have planned different character arcs for MC.

But you did ask about a path, not endings, and while the endings won't come out of nowhere and you'll be able to pick choices that lead to these endings and see the influence of these choices before the endings, it's still not quite a path per se, so I guess it's up to you to decide if this suffice or not.

However, I will say that you shouldn't expect MC to drastically change their morals and views.

I hope this cleared things for you, and feel free to ask more if you have other questions!

Thank you! If all goes according to the plan, hopefully you won't have to wait too long~

Thank you! You will definitely see more of the world in chapter one~

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Thank you! <3 I'm happy you liked these features~ I'm already working on chapter one, hopefully you won't have to wait too long.