I really enjoyed playing the VN, I love all the characters!!
However, I will say there are minor game mistakes that weren't there when day 2 was released. When grabbing lunch at Marcelos work and you choose the new dessert option, Marcelos sprite disappears completely at one point. There are also a lot of minor mistakes that kind of take you out of the immersion of the game a bit, simple mistakes like grammar, not properly labeling the characters or the "You" title when the player is speaking etc.
This is just me being constructive with my criticism but I think it'd be best to just go back and look into polishing up these mistakes as they're easy to make but easy to fix.
I still enjoyed playing this game genuinely and I'm excited for future updates!