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Okay, that's fine. I get that point of view too. I was just trying to make a small suggestion and say my feelings that made me think of it, but then words got put in my mouth and it turned into a whole big thing. I did not mean it to. This has been really stressing me out, so I'm just gonna go now. Thank you. Bye.

Okay. For the 500th time. I DO NOT WANT HIM TO CHANGE THE CHARACTER. The ONLY thing i suggested was some way of letting the reader know what kind of pornographic material would be in each route before they started. Why is that so controversial? Y'all are assuming I'm saying more than I am. Take a fucking chill pill.

Holy shit dude. Like, did you even read my comments? Im saying it was GOOD. I LIKE the story. I was just expressing some dissapointment with the porn aspect in literally the most calm, respectful way I could, and youre acting like I shat in your cereal. I didnt realize you were that kind of person that cant take any criticism at all. Fuck.

Okay, but, obviously there's a difference between real life (or a non-pornagraphic story) and a pornographic game. Have you never gotten really into a porn before and then something happens that you're not into and it totally kills your boner (figuratively)? Imagine that but for something you waited months to see. I still would've read it for the story. It's a great story. And it's really cool that it's free to play. But for the porn elements it's best to know what you're getting into before you start. I'm just trying to leave respectful constructive feedback here.

Spoilers for Hiro Route

Look, for story reasons, I think the Hiro twist is great,  and I wanna be respectful here. If this wasn't porn, I would be estatic. But I just wish you made that clear from the beginning, cause i thought he was the hottest one right off the bat and we waited so long for his route just to find out he doesnt have what im sexually in to and any sexy time with him will be for people with a different sexual preference than what it seemed like. I was so disappointed, it felt like i got blue balled. Love this VN but maybe just put, like, tags on each route so people know what to expect from the sex scenes and whether they should get their hopes (and dicks) up.