I hope you'll consider coming back to this VN at some point in the near-ish future. :)
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I love everything about this VN but I'll never join Patreon because they're a mob of cunts. Also because, to be honest, I'm shocked that they haven't banned you yet, since they frown on this type of *cough*caretaker/ward*cough* relationship. Subscribestar is better but they don't seem to offer PayPal, or accept pre-paid Visa cards, and they ain't getting my real card details. Therefore, good ol' Itch.io is the way I support creators such as yourself.
Hey togs, you really should consider keeping itch up-to-date. Patreon are a mob of fucking dickheads. I finally decided to join and before I could even verify my email they deactivated my account. They claimed "suspicious activity", so I can only assume they did it because I use a VPN. I had to submit a whole bunch of personal shit before they'd even reconsider but I told them to fuck off because they were breaching my privacy rights. I am not a creator, so I wasn't looking to make money, just pay creators for their work but that ain't ever gonna happen on that cunt-site.
Not sure why mr.essa didn't like your dialogue because I think it is the best thing about the avn. Admittedly, it can be a bit jarring jumping from one thing to the next with no easing into it--first meeting with Sophie/Sara for example--but the banter/dialogue from the MC and all the other characters is terrific. The low quality of the graphics is unfortunate but I still rate "Almost Dead" very highly.
So has anyone mentioned the scripting/images error when trying to take Izzy to Luigi's? You have to click ignore, then you get a couple of blank screens, and then a couple of the beach images, and then it continues. I imagine we may be missing some dialogue or something but the Izzy path did complete nonetheless.
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File "game/Scenes/Izzy/IzzyDates/izzyluigisdate.rpy", line 24, in script
scene izzy date car lookingover
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