pretty fun! i loved the characterizations and the art is beautiful, its clear this was made with love. however, (and im no doctor nor am i criticizing) perhaps you should fix the medical procedure done on our character? maybe i misunderstood, but we were pierced by a harpoon, right? in that case the wound should be sewn up i think.
Plus it´d be a nice way to get closer to each twin, either by having stan share a little story about how he learned to sew skin during his outlaw years or by us noticing fords six fingers. idkkkk i loved this tho, cant wait to see the final result <333