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Oliver137

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I enjoyed this, I'm looking forward to the full release, my favourite bits were the intimate/emotional conversations with other characters and customising the romance options is a big plus.

I did feel a little like I didn't get many choices sometimes, once I started a scene it always progressed the same way - you always reject the character at certain points, you always kiss at certain points, you always feel the same way about it, but perhaps that would be too much writing.  Also I felt we got to know the characters a lot better in the flashback episode but I'd already made the choice of who to take, perhaps the choice could be later?

Just a few typos:

"Daniel's face gets somber for a short moment as he becomes serious and meets your eyes."

"Only rich people do stupid things like naming an island after themselves."

"I think it's cool that Micah has an island named after him."

"I know that Micah used to be your bully, but maybe these coming days are what we all need to set things straight."

And also "You carefully open the bedroom door, trying not to wake Cassidy but when you step inside, two pairs of eyes are staring at you."  Two pairs of eyes would be two people (four eyes), I briefly thought Micah was there as well.

I was confused by Taylor, I thought he said he invited me to the wedding to sabotage it so he could get out of it (maybe I read that wrong?) because he didn't have the courage to refuse his parents but then later on the boat he says he's accepted his fate and is excited for what is to come.

Wow that was not what I expected at all but so, so well done.  The sudden transition/"reveal" in the second part was jaw-dropping to me but also an extraordinarily accurate representation, definitely did not see it coming (true to life).  At that point it was interesting how my perspective of the earlier scenes changed and I also realised the library/philosophy scene actually subtly foreshadowed what was to come in a few different ways.  Fortunately I managed to get the very bottom ending which is a relief (kind of afraid of what the others might be tbh).  Thank you for making this, it was an important experience.