Spelling, grammar, and punctuation is lacking, the conversations don't feel natural at all, lacking in both relatable motivation and humour.
This is just a first impression, I'm not entirely discouraged from playing. Wasn't expecting to get raped, very odd choice there.
I feel like the conversations would be better if the characters spoke and acted like real people, the back and forth here is bewildering at times. I can see that there is an attempt at humour, but I think something has been lost in translation.
Another thing I'd like to mention is that many interactions appear entirely superfluous, and feel that a linear narrative would have been a better way to portray the events of the story in a more meaningful way as the player has very little agency.
