It appears I am the first one to comment this demo. I really did enjoy it and cannot wait for future builds. I enjoyed the small, yet emotion stirring journey the story gave. It was short, yet very interesting to me.
I don't exactly know how much this game will change between builds, but I can only see things going up from here.
(I do hope that there are plans to add more visuals throughout the story in future builds, that way it's more attention grabbing for some people.)
Can't wait to see how this game grows, and I wish you the best of luck with the creation of this!