As I understand it, day 14 (before the battle with Zephyr) is the last thing in this novel.
Positive: an interesting story, there are memorable characters. The visual is different for everyone, but I liked it.
Negative: The implementation, the presentation of the story is bad. The dialogues seemed to be written with a difference of several weeks. The choices you make are not felt. Their consequences are not felt. If you choose a character and build a relationship with him, then literally after a couple of scenes there is a feeling that you are seeing each other for the first time. The transition between scenes is also so-so. Battle scenes are not needed in this game. If you cut them out, nothing will change.
If the author ever completes this novel (or rather reworks it), pays attention to reviews and criticism, then honor and glory to him.
PandaMonk
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Good afternoon! Can I ask you something? Perhaps I misunderstood the last words before the end of the game. There will be more chapters dedicated to Charles and John. Will there be the same scenes as in the chapter with Mike? Because I chose Mike. And if I'm going to kiss John somewhere, then it's already cheating on Mike.
I also want to thank the author of this novel from the bottom of my heart. I really liked it. I like the theme of space. And I like to study the influence of science on a person, on feelings and emotions, on the work of the brain and on memory(although my profession is a firefighter). The theory of how quantum entanglement affects the senses is very interesting. This interested me, so I will study this issue in the near future.
Works like this novel give me the motivation to finally learn how to draw and create something like this. And I will do it! I will create something that is not worse than many short stories. Thank you again and good luck in the development of this project!
By the way, Mike is a charming cutie<3