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I'm currently working on a little visual novel project and am in desperate need of some feedback. It's a dark medieval fantasy visual novel. 

It's very barebones at the moment since I've only been working on it for 2 days. I really want feedback on my writing/the premise so far to know if it's interesting to players and if the chapters are too long or short for a VN. 

It's very early in development so there is a lot of placeholder text/images, just to warn you

Any and all feedback is appreciated, thank you! 

https://parasytemy.itch.io/untitled-helfier-game

Hello! I'm interested in learning a bit more about your project and what it could use volunteers for! I did notice your discord link is no longer active, so if you are indeed still looking for a bit of help, I'd love to chat with you a bit! You can also contact me via discord at parasyteMy#5093

Hi! I can already tell, just by reading your post that passion is abundant in this project, which is awesome! Congratulations on going for it, and teaching and learning and growing. I'm interested in volunteering on some projects in any way I can, I've got some visual novel experience, writing, reading, graphic design, photoshop, and the works, I can't remember the last time I opened up an RPG maker engine, but I do know a teeny bit about it. Let me know if there's anything I can do to help get your passion project going and flowing! You can contact me via discord, which is on my profile, or wherever works best for you, Best wishes! 

I've gone ahead and emailed you with interest in the beta reading! Good luck on the project!

Having expressions can add a new layer of detail and realism in a VN, I think it was a good choice to change the art style however I was wonderinf if these are placeholder sprites or if these are what you plan to use in the full game (Whenever that may be released)

Just a tip! The copyright line says 2106. And what are the minimum specs? If known