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I thoroughly enjoyed this. It's a story about how actions can have consequences and it's something the resonates with me very well. My only gripe about this is that I feel the epilogue should have been told thoroughly instead of a quick few sentences. It would have been interesting to see a change in Sam's behavior from a bully to a victim and how Molly would have dealt with it knowing that either a) Adrianna, Sam's best friend, started the whole thing (possible redemption sub plot) or b) Olivia, the new girl, sparked a revolution of sorts against someone who has bullied others for years.