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I played this on chrome for android with no problems!

Well - the actual problem is probably that I've played this FAR too many times. I don't know how you made this so hot but I am legit obsessed.

Thanks so much for posting!<3

Oh I am just in LOVE with this game.

The way you write sex is excellent, and the relationships (especially with Jake!) are really sweet. 

I think the thing that really sets this apart from other stories for me is your balance between porn and story. They're interlinked, with the more sexy scenes furthering the plot and the plot providing a more interesting setting for the sex. You never go too long without reminded us of either aspect, so it doesn't feel jarring when you reach a sex scene OR when you get story beats.

The routes are all pretty unique, even when characters seem like they could be similar. Even the endgame scenes are worth exploring just to get more content.

There's a real variety in the characters and the stories themselves. Jake and Ritch both have incredibly hot stories especially - though that might just be me being a slut for dads and sons - but you do a great job at getting the player invested in characters we meet later on, too. 

The characters are physically different in a great way, too. Your artist is doing incredible work because I did NOT expect to be thirsting over a rat man!! But you get a lot of credit here too - the use of images works really to create atmosphere. Particularly in Jake, Ritch and Firen's routes.

I don't remember seeing any actual errors/bugs in this? Which is honestly wild considering how much content is in this! I shudder to think what the actual word count of this whole thing is.

My only concern is that currently to get the full content of this game you have to play it at least ~9 times (just based on the amount of main characters - there's more with the extra game over characters!). While the save file function cuts down a lot time, having to pick your major at the start means you've got to do at least 3 resets to potentially get all the content.

That's incredibly impressive on your part, but it might be nice to release a (vague!) guide to direct people to specific kinks so they're not searching for content. I know the character list has a kink list, but it's difficult to know which choices are going to lead you to which kink, and if they're going to be unattainable due to your major choice. You could even put it on your patron, or as a one time buy to avoid people signing up just to get a document then immediately cancelling.

I know this game isn't completed so things might become clearer as we go. And of course I'm not going to tell you what to spend you time on! But it's just something to consider from someone who's spent a LOT of time here.  hope you take this as a compliment from someone trying to get more out of your stories rather than a demand from an entitled internet rando!

Thank you so much for all the time you've put into this game. It's a pleasure to read and you should be so so proud of how your hard work has paid off!<3

Thank you so much! I just replayed and it's honestly even hotter than I remembered...

<3 No problem at all!

I totally get that, Twine is really straight forward right up until it really isn't. I'm super glad you didn't lose your nerve though!

Right back at you:)

I expected this to be really hot but I didn't expect to be so weirdly invested in the Jake/Player romance?? Congratulations there, because writing a *romance* with player choices that's still incredibly sexy is a real achievement.

Logistically, I love the way the character screen functions because it's so unobtrusive.  Adding specific kinks that are in that character's path is really helpful, too. The save function worked great, although I've found the back button is really limited. Not sure if that's intentional, though. 

Looking forward to seeing the later days!<3

Ok so thanks for showing me kinks I didn't know I had, I guess??

This is insanely hot - and a really clean game for the first adult one you've completed! The options are customised enough to make it fun and I like that you added notes to the endings in the extra section. It's the little details that go a long way!

I really appreciate the suggestions for the doctor's name and the pet-name, too. Cute mix of relatively normal stuff and some very cheesy names, and way too many people seem to expect players to just have a set of names off the top of their heads.

I didn't spot any problems or bugs playing. The only "issue" I had is that you have to complete a session to restart. Not a problem, just something that'd be cool to include in a future project - or make more obvious, if I'm just missing it!

Thanks for making this! I uhh really enjoyed it<3<3<3