Love what I see here so far. excellent work!
Only think that got me was, and I'm not trying to be a perv here, the excessive fog in the bath/shower scene. I understand you're trying to keep it at least in the G to PG range, but its actually kind of distracting having nearly a quarter of the screen whited out like that.
That's honestly my only gripe. Otherwise, I really look forward to how this progresses.
Keep up the awesome work! ^_^