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Raheed

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Well, I am going to leave my review here for the game with feedback (of course)

- 1st of all, the game has a good premise. And I love the part that you're character can grow stronger, that also has (I think for now) a little impact on how the female's/male's react to you.

- Because this game is still in the beginning phase of development, that there is only 1 way to earn money in the game, what I would recommend is to add 1 or 2 more jobs where you're character can work. For example working at the convenience store/cafe. (it keeps the "the wholesome route" players happy...)

- I really liked the part about the story that something sinister happened, and why only the girls are beefed up. The other part of the story that is also interesting is that you're family has a hidden secret, that you're parent tries to solve alone. Are you going to expand on that stories and get different kind of answers depending on what actions you make in "certain" scenario's?

- I haven't gone through every datable partner yet, but the one's I have seen are very interesting and can't wait until they're stories are expanded upon! (My personal favorite is Rachel if you wanted to know...)

I hope you have a great time creating this game, and of course have fun with it as well! Just take it a step at a time, the fundament of the game is getting there! And also hope that this game for YOU be completed, and that I will keep cheering on the sideway.

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on the top-right of your screen (if your using a desktop/laptop) you can see 4 options. follow, add, rate and related games. just press the 2nd option "add to collection". It should give you the option to what collection you want to add it, you can make a new one or add to a existing collection that you made before.

After that, go to you're own account menu and you can see "library". click to go to your added games.

no problem at all, and it wasn't a message in "pushing" way. It is like I said before, out of curiosity. And I am glad you are doing fine despite being busy with work. Such things happen. Take you're time with the game you are so proud of, and even more once it is finished. Don't feel pushed, just keep going at your own pace.

It is been a while, but I am curious. Are you still having fun creating this game? Or have you stopped temporarily?? I still love this game how it is made, and I hope you are doing fine developer/creator.

I finally played the latest update. And the game has become better in a lot of ways. 

1. Buying ingredients has become easier.

2. The new events with the streamer has become really good with narrative.

3. Many more stuff that it is hard to sort here in chronological order.

I still have some feedback for the current version.

1. The story of the streamer has become so good and the relationship with the MC has become so close that she could be considered a dateable person.

2. At the end of the current version you have the choice who you go with. If you have a considerable amount of money/or whatever way it could be, that you have the choice to move to a better apartment/house.

3. I also read somewhere at the end about "paying rent". Are you going to implement that?

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But do take you're time though. Keep having fun creating stuff.

noticed something that could be expanded upon.

When you click the option "get some food". That you have the choice what restaurant you want. Like a fastfood chain restaurant to safe costs, a local restaurant and for the last a fancy expensive restaurant.

This could be a good combination when you're MC gets a promotion for a better job at the office. Since more money to spend.

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I will say it is a great game in it's early stages! So cheers for that!

But there are a few things that bothered me a bit. I listed them below in order.

- In the current version of the game you will get a raise in money when you go up in weight. But think to get a bit more in-depth is after some overworking times, that a promotion is offered instead with the descriptions what the MC is doing in their working hours.

-- adding a bit more to that, is putting a "break" while you're at the office giving the MC the opportunity to hold conversations/deepen the bond between certain characters.

- When the scene of the last weightstage of the MC starts to play, it says that she would need new furniture to accomodate her. That could also be more fleshened out. Giving you the choice to add more things to her house (like sofa's, better cooking equipment, etc.)

- This more of a personal idea. So you can leave it alone if you don't like it. The mukbang stream is a good idea where the MC herself can do it aswell, but only on days off. Like a weekend. But that would mean implementing a "week"-system. Where the MC works from monday till friday (typically standard I know) and saturday/sunday do other things. But that would be overthrowing the whole system and a lot of work.

I am still playing the game to see if there are other things that come to my notice. But I will say it again, IT IS A GOOD GAME WITH A GOOD START! And I cheer for you to make your vision for the game a reality (and finish it, that you can be proud of aswell)