This is a pretty good prototype, guys. Well done! If I may, I'd like to offer some feedback:
• There are a lot of misspellings, including Dozier's name
• A "Controls" page and maybe a tutorial
• "Objectives" notices and markers
• A more intuitive way to scroll through dialogue options. Using just "B" is a little clunky
• What is the purpose for aiming/zooming in? The shots seem accurate enough
• Will it be possible to go into other buildings?
• Camera control options to slow down or speed up the camera
• The "Takedown" action command should pop up over Bass, not the NPC. It will be easier to read and react to
• Maybe the "Takedown" action command can pop up sooner so you don't have to brush up against the enemy?
• Maybe the "Takedown" action command can be on the mouse instead of on "E" to make it a bit easier to use?
That's all I got. Good luck with your project moving forward!